This is a short but very meaningful poem. You have really said so much in so few words and even though it is short in length it is deep with sentiment. This is a very sweet poem but could be scary to travel to places unknown to man hee hee! Love can have a strange effect on some people, I have noticed. Yet, it is still a wonderful feeling to be in love and better to experience it than not I suppose. Just make sure you wear your seatbelt. haha! I dont believe I have ever read anything by you before and perhaps I shall visit again. Take care.
A deceptively simple tanka, and theme. Both sound so obviously simple...open your heart...write 5 lines. Neither is easy at all, as most of us have learned through living. I loved the earlier comment ...made me hear Cpt. Kirk: 'boldly go where no man has gone before'! ;) Although, that's really depressing when you get below the surface of it; to have a heart that's never been fully recognized must be a lonely existence. Thanks for a good tanka; I needed that. Happy Holidays to you and yours, arkay.
hey yes it is very simple and to the point .. thts obvious and absolutely unnecessary to state again but ohwell.. i liked it. neways yer it is short but if you're like me it takes quiet a bit of effort to actually write 5 lines! (:p) especially some tht make sense and r enjoyable to read lol.
basically what im saying is tht this was a nice write. although i little bit more wuld be a tad better. but its funi cuz it doesnt seem unfinished.
gd write love anoutia §~*~xXx~*~§ p.s culd u comment on my latest write 'nostalgia' or 'your love can save me'? i would like some comments (:p) hehe
Hey there. Simple and to the point, just the way I like it. As always you write things that convey an easy to understand message without saying so much that the reader becomes confused. Anyhoo...much love to ya and happy holidays!