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    dots Submission Name: Alwaysdots
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    Author: EL
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 272/189/52
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1030
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    dotsAlwaysdots
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    I love you and I hate you
    I love to talk I about you but I hate to talk to you.
    I love it when you hold me close but I hate when you get to close.
    You make me laugh you make me cry
    And wonder why I feel this way when I think of you.
    I love to be around you but I hate to be with.
    Through good times and bad times
    Through ups and down
    It seems your always around.
    I can't imagine my without you but I can't imagine my life with.
    These feelings are all so crazy and yet so real.
    But at the end of the it's all the same,
    You belong to me and I belong to you,
    And that's the way it will always be.




    Submitted on 2004-12-20 10:57:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i get this "ten things i hate about you" feeling from this...

    significant others can do this to us...

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-06-25 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      "You make me laugh you make me cry "glad im not the only one whose had this feeling. i love this poem because it hits the nail on the head gfor one of those love hate relationships. its like saying i lvoe you but i not IN love with you. it makes soem sense but then goes to completely confuse the person youve said it to. i love it i love it i love it
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by broken_dreamer | [ Reply to This ]
      "i love but i hate you , you make me laugh but you make me cry" exactly how i feel i love him but i hate him all these feelings feel crazy but yet they are so real like you said and i can't imagine being without not even for a single day but he complicates thing sometimes even makes things bad for me but he is the balance in my life.
    i love your work and hope to see more.
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by janedaq222 | [ Reply to This ]


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