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The Art Of Nothing

Author: brokenmirror
ASL Info:    150/f/duiuwy89
Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 46 /71 /29
Words: 44
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i kinda like where this may be going....but i dont know where to actually! ahh!!!

The Art Of Nothing

A painting
glowing with heartbreak
A picture
colored with sorrow
A drawing
sketched with anger
A canvas
decorated in hate

The art of nothing
is the only kind that matters
it is the most beautiful,
the most meaningful...

Submitted on 2004-12-20 19:44:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow, i think you have a masterpiece here. there's alot said in so few words. i think your mind could go further too. exceptional work!
| Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
  How can it be nothing if it's something?
Everything you had here was something there for it's not nothing. oh well I guess I look to far into things.
| Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  you could elaborate more on the parallelism you already have, other than that, I like it. I feel the pain of an empty canvas sitting next to some that are deemed beautiful, but the blank one is beautiful in its own sense. Am I close?
| Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by Paconess1006 | [ Reply to This ]
  ah, but ti's not 'nothing', is it? it's so much more. pain put into words. please add some more to this-it's great as it is but I think you can go further. I think it's wonderful. excellent job.
| Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]

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