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    dots Submission Name: The Art Of Nothingdots
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    Author: brokenmirror
    ASL Info:    150/f/duiuwy89
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 46/71/29
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 304
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    Description:
       i kinda like where this may be going....but i dont know where to actually go...help! ahh!!!


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    dotsThe Art Of Nothingdots
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    A painting
    glowing with heartbreak
    A picture
    colored with sorrow
    A drawing
    sketched with anger
    A canvas
    decorated in hate

    The art of nothing
    is the only kind that matters
    it is the most beautiful,
    the most meaningful...








    Submitted on 2004-12-20 19:44:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow, i think you have a masterpiece here. there's alot said in so few words. i think your mind could go further too. exceptional work!
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by MMISS | [ Reply to This ]
      How can it be nothing if it's something?
    Everything you had here was something there for it's not nothing. oh well I guess I look to far into things.
    TGA
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      you could elaborate more on the parallelism you already have, other than that, I like it. I feel the pain of an empty canvas sitting next to some that are deemed beautiful, but the blank one is beautiful in its own sense. Am I close?
    ~Paco!
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by Paconess1006 | [ Reply to This ]
      ah, but ti's not 'nothing', is it? it's so much more. pain put into words. please add some more to this-it's great as it is but I think you can go further. I think it's wonderful. excellent job.
    | Posted on 2004-12-20 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]



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