Description: This is for a friend of mine whom I wish was more than a friend. It's something I like he would like if he ever read it, but he won't so it doesn't matter. I'm open to all thoughts, so just go ahead and hit me with them.
For. . . You -------------------------------------------
Like I said, Iím confuzzed.
No, not confused. Con-fuzz-ed . Yeah, thatís right. Confused is something that sophisticlated. . . sopistilated. . . sotiphilated. . . yeah, those sort of people get. I donít get confused. I get con-fuzz-ed.
And why not just get confused? Well, confused is more of a sodisticaphed meaning for chaos-of-the-brain -- you have a set group of emotions that youíre experiencing. Confuzzed is more like happy sad glad mad FURIOUS crying growling singing yelling jumping-up-and-down-then-passing-out-from-feeling-overload. Yeah. See what I mean?
Itís a nice feeling, in some ways. Like getting high without losing a ton of brain cells. At least, I think you donít lose brain cells. I could be wrong though. Woo-oo. . .
Uh-hum. Anyway, Iíd just like to thank all the people who put me in this un-sophisticlateded state of confuzzion. You especially. Life's fun like this. (Almost as fun as being with you. . . but not quite.)
this is playful and sweet and damn it I am so happy to read a young person writing something other than "I want to kill myself, my parents, their parents, the dog, you, ..." I feel confuzzed from time to time and I am 30. You tapped that young girl in me- nudged her, told her it's okay to spin in circles and act goofy and get high on horomones and people and giggle and blow dandelions to pieces. I think this is charming and perfect in it's journal-esqueness. I would rather be confuzzed than confused any day. Cheers...Magnolia
ah I see I'm not the only one that just rants from time to time... ;) nice to get a glimpse into your personal thoughts this way... this felt more like a journal entry to me and that's fine 'cause I always love to hear (or in this case, read ;)) what others think and feel about certain things...
your confuzzed theory sounds to me like restlessness... I don't know *shrug* I feel that way sometimes too and I don't enjoy that feeling at all... that state makes me feel like I'm going down the road of madness hehe :) I don't know the particulars of your situation with that person but I'm gathering he is a good friend of yours but feelings inside of you make you want to have a romantic involvement with him... hm... if that's the case, yeah... I get the drift of your text quite well... personal experience for me... I ventured the romance venue with my best friend and it flopped miserably... to the point our closeness is vanished today... not a very great feeling... but anyway, if it's not the case, sorry... I don't know the details hehe ;)
you have a nice way of expressing yourself... kept me interested with each line :) thanks for passing the time that way and sharing... I enjoyed this :)
I also wanted to thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my posting... your impression was really nice to know :) I'm pleased you liked :)
Its nice to see that some people are happy to see things say the same, especially when I can't. You ask for writing advise? How can I give that on a piece that has no rhyme, no flow, and no structure? I did like how you used con-fuzz-ed because it seems to put things in a different frame of mind as I read this. But I think the whole write is too based around that one idea, rather than the person (who only gets a mention twice.)
Heh heh. I know how ya feel. I like how you're blaming a person for putting you in such bad shape...and yet you're acting like its all fun and games...when in fact you're devastated by how [censored]ed up you feel and how much you like them. Even though theykind of [censored]ed you over...
I've heard that word somewhere once before *looks away in deep thought... returns to life* Yeah I know what you're talking about. But as your writing goes on it begins to lose the randomness, but it leavs on a big note, but not quite. And how exactly did you managhe all the different spellings of sophisticlated... or whatever. It confuzzes me... hehe. Great stuff, keep writing! ~Paco!
I enjoyed the randomess, free-read-it-how-you-want-to-see-it utilized here.
The explanation of your feelings, expressed further by your constant misspelling of sophisticated (I realize it was on purpose and always different).
I enjoy reading free-writes like this more often than I enjoy reading poetry. Most poetry bores me and I barely make it through to the end of anything. Stuff like this I read without rhythem, without rules and without the need for "flow" and "rhyme."
Anyways, it's a good feeling when you're confuzzed, at least in my opinion. But you say he'll never read it... make him. ;)
Just be like "hey, look what I wrote." He doesn't have to know you're confuzzed because of him!
Haha...wow....that was neat! Where'd you come up with that idea?? I loved it. You want writing advice? Well there's not much I can tell you within the contexts of this piece but I can tell you that as aspiring young poets, I think we need to stay out of the clichť-mode...I find myself drifting back and forth out of that land...lol This write sorta made me feel like I was on a journey to that clichť land- your ideas were very good but some didn't quite strike me as original. Now the whole "Confuzzed" thing...that was very original. Good job! I can see why you said the things you did though, so you had good reason. But I do agree with you on what you said about sophisticated people and being confused...being confused is just too good sometimes...gotta reach down to that lower level of confuzzed....hahaha...overall, a very nice job. Write me something a tad bit longer and I'll give you a little bit better advice.I hate I can't say more. -----wandering