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Submission Name:
The Commuter
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Author:
solitary_cross
ASL Info:
19/female/Philippines
Elite Ratio:
3.4 - 92/107/24
Words:
116
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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Description:
This is about a commuter who waited for seconds, minutes, and hours before the bus arrives...well, in the aspect of a performer that is.
The Commuter
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He just stood there
Amidst the plains of anticipation
Not a blink, not a movement
He remained firm on his ground
The blinding rays
Casting down on him
A spotlight on his stage
That witnessed his character
He eyed his audience
and felt their whispers
Their scorching mockery
Echoed through his skin
Deprived of attention
He did not submit to them
Eyes fixed at a distance
To avoid their lifeless gaze
Desperation crept into his veins
As the sound of nothingness prevailed
He shuddered beneath his sweat
Longing for deliverance
Seconds of breathing
Minutes of impatience
Hours of anxiety
But all he needed was a moment
Just a moment.
Submitted on 2004-12-22 06:18:03
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