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    dots Submission Name: Just Another Facedots
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    Author: AmandaLyn
    ASL Info:    18/F/ Centralia
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 292/292/42
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 318
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsJust Another Facedots
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    Another face,
    another name,
    another girl,
    another game.

    One more heart,
    one more win
    you've broken enough hearts
    to make your head spin.

    You fooled me once,
    you fooled me twice,
    I was fooled,
    I thought you were nice.

    I fell in love,
    thought you did too
    but I found out
    I meant nothing to you.

    Just another face,
    another name,
    another girl
    another game.




    Submitted on 2004-12-22 22:12:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I had seen your kind
    it just makes me want to rewind
    with knowledge I have in mind
    not to trust another guy that is your kind
    lol
    sorry for that poem.
    this was cute. I vision a middle school preteen girl telling this to her ex.
    peace
    | Posted on 2005-09-16 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the idea...the poem is about a boyfriend or man who used you but you must elaborate...tell me about your pain what did he do to you that let you know you meant nothing?
    did he forget your birthday? did he date your sister? did he break up with you without a bit of class? the beauty is in the deatails.
    | Posted on 2004-12-22 00:00:00 | by BlondieLKC | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh damn him damn him to hell.

    I don't know about this one. Not really sure if I like it or not...I mean it's not good and it's not bad. Sorry just being honest.
    Peace and Harmony
    TGA
    | Posted on 2004-12-22 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]



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