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    dots Submission Name: Some Boobs to Touchdots
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    Author: Me Rambling
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    dotsSome Boobs to Touchdots
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    Here's the story, of a man named Robbie
    who was being driven insane by the world.
    Pride was broken -- pushed into a corner,
    watch as his soul unfurls.

    Here's the story, of a pill named Roofies,
    "Rohypnol" in the television shows.
    The best sedative and narcotic for
    every girl you know.

    Till the one day when the Roofies met ole' Robbie,
    and he took this little bottle out for lunch;
    dropped two pills inside a Jack and Pepsi,
    and looked for some perky boobs to touch!

    Some boobs to touch, some boobs to touch,
    that's how Roofie and me found some boobs to touch.




    Submitted on 2004-12-23 10:08:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i never read this before...this is [censored]in hilarious...everyone is lookin at me now...i'm [censored]in rollin...oh man this was good. lol...i can't even think...i need to get out of here. oh man, this was so funny. i need some roofies...lol...and some boobs to touch. holy [censored]...this was funny...take care bro
    | Posted on 2005-09-18 00:00:00 | by austin | [ Reply to This ]
      well it seems that most people were veryfond of this -me on the other hand really don't find it all that funny . I mean it's ok but-i just went back and read it.(again) and I am proud to say GOT IT-2 WORDS Brady Bunch
    thank You and goodnight
    lamemansterms
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]
      Not sure about the masked meaning, but on the surface you are saying you used date-rape drugs to get some. Not sure why people are finding it to be so funny. I'm thinkin it's tragic and sad.

    Sounds like maybe ole Robbie was fed up with being rejected, so he took matters into his own hands. Almost sounds like you're saying he took the pills himself...

    OK. You had this listed as religious, so let me ramble for a minute...boobs represent something you desire to touch...in a religious context would that be inner peace? enlightenment? God himself?

    The date rape drug allows you to reach what you're trying to get, but without permission...you can't find the religious peace with the way the world is dragging you down, so you take this self-fulfilling drug to get there...to get there you have to leave this world...suicide???

    are you saying he [censored]ed himself? Help me out here...
    | Posted on 2005-01-16 00:00:00 | by deadndreaming | [ Reply to This ]
      Hahaha, that was [censored] great man.

    "Some boobs to touch, some boobs to touch,
    that's how Roofie and me found some boobs to touch."

    Good stuff. Sounds something like Jay and Silent Bob would say.

    By the way, Jack and Pepsi is good, but Jack and Dr. Pepper is better. Never had it with a Roche, though. But if I did I would find some boobs to touch.
    | Posted on 2005-01-14 00:00:00 | by Apocalyptica | [ Reply to This ]
      haha storm of bliss likes girls. not that there is anything wrong with that if she really does ;-) maybe she can call me up some time hah just joking, to make certain that everybody knows i dont swing that way.... but yeah. this was funny.

    i didnt know what Rohypnol was until a few weeks ago when six_grey left me a comment saying "peac love and Rohypnol" and i was wtf is that? so i had to look in to it. im glad that i understood it before i read this though lol by the way, you rhymed, and this was a poem.

    YOU = POET

    MWAHAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HOA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
    go touch some boobies or somethiing to celebrate your self realization / actualization... you flipping poet you! hehehe, even if it is a bit raunchy its still a real poem :) go you heh

    Some boobs to touch, some boobs to touch,
    that's how Roofie and me found some boobs to touch.

    nice.... it sounds like a song from the flipping bloodhound gang. jjjez you perv, next thing you know youre gonna be singing the roof is on fire or nothin but mammals. whacko.

    peace love and explicit drugs
    =-=hillarie=-=
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by falloutgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      And Robbie and Roofie lived happily ever after in prision after those boobies woke up and called 911! hehe Funny write. :)

    -blt
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      kinda funnym, I like how you classified it under religion, those damn demons of life, breaking every code you once thought were so true. I do agree with the last commenter that it sounds like a rap, a well written rap. It actually flows extremely well, and each line has a certain edge to it, just like most raps do, gathering in the people, only to be shocked by the weird and thought provoking lyrics. Very well written. It's weird how so many people of different stature and possision can come together, to meet. I took the writing as too men comming from very different lives, but overall uniting to gether in the simplicity of one of the most universal human emotion, the lust and need for sexual activity and or enjoyment. I really enjoyed this peice, i think i'll see if you have others, It is so awesome to read something new, even if it is as strange as this, oh i love starnge peices. ANyways thanks for the post
    much love
    kaity
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by Kaitylizzy | [ Reply to This ]
      Class: Religious? Yeah, uh-huh! Don't know if this is very PC, but I guess you don't care. It sounds like a silly rap song complete with man-made beat box noises. Keep up the weird work, Robbie! -Lazy Spleen
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by Lazy Spleen | [ Reply to This ]
      Class: Religious? Yeah, uh-huh! Don't know if this is very PC, but I guess you don't care. It sounds like a silly rap song complete with man-made beat box noises. Keep up the weird work, Robbie! -Lazy Spleen
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by Lazy Spleen | [ Reply to This ]
      Dude you rhymed! Can't say I like the meaning behind this poem, but ya did a good job on it nonetheless. It's funny. Never had Jack and Pepsi... plus, I prefer it straight. Don't slip me a roofie, man.
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by WaxingPoetic | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha ha ha, amusing. Very amusing. I don't quite understand the reasoning for this, and I'm sure it's best that I don't. But oh well. How are you doing my dear?
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by Juliets_dagger | [ Reply to This ]
      well add me to another laughing echo in the halls of comments.

    I thought the surface was quite entertaining. nothing like touching perky boobies. ;) some days I'm just loving the fact I have em ;)

    okay all silliness aside. perhaps when you get a chance (I know how busy thou are) you can help me to see under the surface of this write.
    | Posted on 2004-12-28 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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