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    dots Submission Name: Prayer Seasondots
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    Author: max
    ASL Info:    27 m tennessee
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 152/191/55
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsPrayer Seasondots
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    On a day such as this,
    I feel free to live my way.
    I feel free to attend church these days.
    Upon the coming Sunday, I will.
    --Run, run away bitter heart,
    hide thy face from this day.
    For thou hast hid thy face thus far;
    twenty-five years I have never seen your face,
    such a day as this is no time to appear.

    --Here comes God, dear hear must hide.
    Hide thyself today and stay hidden throughout
    the prayer season.




    Submitted on 2004-12-23 19:31:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think everyone feels like this from time to time. Although, there is no use hiding, God will always be able to see you. But, prayer season..yes! I think all of us in this world that's corrupted need not one season, but a year of prayer.
    | Posted on 2008-10-06 00:00:00 | by Gothic Misery | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't know who's hiding from whom,but God is very real. He is always with us. At those times when we can't feel His presence,it is because we are not looking hard enough. God will never forsake us!
    | Posted on 2004-12-23 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ]


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