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    dots Submission Name: hatedots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       very mad at my parents.


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    dotshatedots
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    Being yelled at for something i didn't do
    always being called a fool
    Always being ruled
    Just want to see how it feels to be the ruler
    I crave for attention.
    I hate being a slave
    Have to everything
    another child gets atitude
    i just want to go to a differnt alittude

    sick of parents favoring
    while putting another kid slavery

    why are you staring, I'm yours
    why are you not caring

    you know what fuck it
    life goes on
    I will move on
    but still i will never stop hating you.




    Submitted on 2004-12-25 04:54:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very powerful poem i know how it is when on parent favors another and yells for the most stupidiest reasons make you wonder if they just love hurting your feelings i love this piece please keep it up i hope to readm ore of your fantastic writings
    | Posted on 2004-12-25 00:00:00 | by withouthope | [ Reply to This ]
      I can understand the anger you have towards your parents but I don't think you should hate them... one day something may happen to them and then you'll be mad at yourself for hating them and not giving things a chance to change...
    you are still young, you have your whole life ahead of you and things will change, one day (I hope) you will realize that your parents do love you and I hope you can grow to love them! Don't take your parents for granted, one day they will be gone.
    | Posted on 2004-12-25 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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