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    dots Submission Name: Neverdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 807
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 333



    Description:
       This is once again about the guy that I can't tell him my feelings, he is completely in love with another girl, it's not fair.


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    dotsNeverdots
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    I never wanted to know
    I never could tell
    I never needed to see
    that I could have fell

    fell in love
    fell for you
    someone to trust
    someone I knew

    I never wanted to know
    I never wanted to see
    that you were the one
    that was loved by me




    Submitted on 2004-12-27 17:52:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this peice. it was short and to the point. i dont think that i can pick out a best part because i thought the whole thing was great! great work!
    | Posted on 2004-12-28 00:00:00 | by _Joeysgirl_ | [ Reply to This ]


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