Description: This is about this guy who I have known forever, he was in my sisters class and he is like six years older than me, somehow we were hanging out tonight and on the ride home he gave me loritab and I am pretty sure he was "using them to his advantage". Makes me kinda dissapointed because I always thought he was so cool.
Pills to Your Advantage -------------------------------------------
Alcohol on your breath
desire in your eyes
such pretty colors
but your such a decieving guy
much to old
and much to mature
as you place your hands on my legs I remain unsure
what are your intentions as you pass me these pills
what are you thinking and what is this that I feel
You make me sick and sadly I am temtped
taken advantage of and slightly twisted
pills to your advantage
you whisper for me to come closer and seduce me with your eyes
both in the backseat
hidden from the public eye
to close to alone
I fear what you hide
the car comes to a halt, I can now walk away
the choice is taken
I suffer no pain
barely an escape
dissapointment setting in
I barely walk away
will you try this again?
I love the realism espoused by the near desire to give in even though the thought of it is repulsive. You never sound outright angry, per se, just upset and disturbed... very, VERY well written about a subject that is very unsettling.
this was a very good piece. It was well written and the flow was great. I agree with borderlintears you really do need to tell someone, because it could happen to someone else. That would not be a good thing. I"m really sorry this happened to ya and i hope your well. Good luck with your situation.
This is awful. You need to tell someone about him using that on you. Just think - he could do it to one of your friends or someone you know. Guys like that are dicks. I'm sry this happened to ya. Good write though. I hope you never find yourself in that situation again. Good luck. -blt
very calmly written. i feel no rage but a questioning and i hope that u get your answers. i am sorry this happen to u. but u have chose to deal with it in this amazing way. somethings are best written down.
very well written and described.. you know how to put your feelings toegether in an amazing form.. never lose that.. as an advice from someone who probably is no body .. take care for who you choose its in the end your life you lose
i liked this peice a lot. it's good that you can get out your feelings in your writing. i liked how it was calm, most people probably would have written it with a lot of anger. you did good on the description as well. im sorry that it happened though, at least that's as far as it went. great job on the write.