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    dots Submission Name: Simply Crydots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 255



    Description:
       This is about this guy who feels the need to constantly remind me of his hatred. I am completely aware of it and I just don't think it is necessary for him to let me know all the time.
    So I simply cry.


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    dotsSimply Crydots
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    I know your hate
    I know those eyes filled with pain
    you try and cut me so well
    and you do succeed

    I know your hate
    you remind me everyday
    you need my tears to make you feel powerful
    and I simply cry




    Submitted on 2004-12-28 16:09:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Simple and very true.
    Sometimes people do derive pleasure on hurting others, specially when they are lovers. Its majorly a Male Trait though.
    The desire to be dominant perhaps.
    Can't figure that out.
    | Posted on 2005-01-02 00:00:00 | by moaxcym | [ Reply to This ]
      so sad. and depressing. hope you feel better.
    i like this especially...
    you remind me everyday
    you need my tears to make you feel powerful
    | Posted on 2004-12-28 00:00:00 | by closebutremote | [ Reply to This ]
      this was good. usually i like short poems but this one seems like it could stand to have another stanza added to it. besides that i thought it was good.
    | Posted on 2004-12-28 00:00:00 | by _Joeysgirl_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I know your hate
    I know those eyes filled with pain
    you try and cut me so well
    and you do succeed

    now i might cry...this was good
    | Posted on 2004-12-28 00:00:00 | by shattered_dream | [ Reply to This ]


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