Hey there. Wow. I've never read your stuff before, but I'm very impressed. Haiku is my favorite poetry form. And this is one excellent example of a haiku.
The idea of this poem, faith as a window is just awesome. And the wind as the antagonist to faith. The wind representing struggle and the worlds trials I'm assuming.
This is great writing my dear.
I must also say that it makes me excessivly happy to see a haiku on this site with the correct format. I've seen tons of so-called haikus with the wrong format. That peeves me to no end. Anyhoo...much love to ya my dear.
so where so close on be perfectly lined up with the pattern. the last line though should have had the same number of syllables as the fist. just five. i am so gald to see that there is another person here that write hikius. i havent posted any yet. i ve been trying to work on lemricks., i am going to give you my messenger. if you ever need help on want to write lemrickshikius back and forth i shall meet you there. email@example.com or firstname.lastname@example.org peace snuff