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    dots Submission Name: minimal love poemdots
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    Author: aghori
    ASL Info:    30 M Nv
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 45/56/18
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 531
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 252



    Description:
       The product of a group writting session in which we were writing bad poems on purpose. Bad poem, for sure, but one of my favorites :)


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    dotsminimal love poemdots
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    Picking at the edges
    of new thick skin
    courtesy of writhing maggots
    in the stinky french cheese
    of my heart
    I am reminded of that time
    in that place
    and that thing
    that changed us
    forever




    Submitted on 2003-12-18 13:43:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Pretty disgusting but very funny. I had to laugh especially at "the stinky french cheese of my heart." So out there. Crack me up. Good job on a bad poem.
    | Posted on 2004-10-25 00:00:00 | by ber | [ Reply to This ]
      umm. I'm confoozed. I'd give it a five for bad poem though it's a very excellent terrible poem.
    | Posted on 2003-12-20 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]
      I've never heard of writing a bad poem on purpose, or "how to audition for a show and not get in" but it sounds interesting enough. Lol....it is a bad poem, though, but if that's what you were going for then congrats!!! As long as you like it.
    | Posted on 2003-12-19 00:00:00 | by JKPS613 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol know what you mean, we do that at the theater with "how to audition for a show and not get in" it was really funny........
    | Posted on 2003-12-18 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]



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