Forget about the comments below, they have no idea on the subject so they shouldn't have spok- er, written in the first place.
Haiku 1: A good one. Could mean simple patience from the little ones in nature.
Haiku 2: I like it I personally think it's about the noble people who live through life with no regrets.
Haiku 3:Like the pun in the second line, very nice. The image gathered from those words was of a dreamer in a forest. (eh, call me weird)
Haiku 4: Either the clouds are the good that protects the people from the Sun OR the clouds are depriving the people from light. Either way it wasa good write.
Haiku 5: Uh... i think u meant "calm"? for line 1 right? and number five... well it was just pretty
umm...i really dont know about this i'm not really that into hiaku poems. I don't know much about them either, but they were pretty good. and you are very right it does have good imagery. mikki
Submission Name: Haikus of a Sort
I personally think it's about the noble people who live through life with no regrets.