"Memorizing your voice when it was no longer there Whispering your words when you no longer cared"
Very neat description
"Engraved your name here Left your sent here"
I like these lines a lot too.
I think that you could work on the emotional description just a little bit more though. Add some words to it that will totally scream what you are feeling. You have it started but I think that it could improve (just a tiny bit). But overall this is a really good peice. I enjoyed reading it.
broken friendship? micki, i'm so scared of something like this, i mean, your words just keep sending me reminders os how it could be really hard for me to deal with. so yeah, you're poem really brought that to life. It was dark, but clear...if that makes any sense. i liked it though. your words just make sense to me, you know that? well...take care love and i'll talk to you sometime.
I really liked this poem. I like the part that was reaped the most... "All alone
Left behind" I never would have thought to do that, but thats just me and I have trouble coming up with good ideas. I feel like I'm going through this with someone right now, its not a good feeling, and I like the way it shown here.