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    dots Submission Name: Two Person Puzzledots
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    Author: D.Johnson p.s.a
    ASL Info:    17/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 45/59/15
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 313
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 740



    Description:
       I wrote this when the boy I was talking to started talking to some other female and I still wanted to get with him but it seem like that wasn't going to happen


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    dotsTwo Person Puzzledots
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    Who is she to you
    I know she's not me
    So tell me when you look into her eyes what do you see

    I lied to myself
    to ever find interest in you
    but was stupid
    to ever fall for you
    maybe I was pushin it
    maybe I wasn't
    you didn't feel the same feelings I felt
    so why try and push it

    There is another
    why fight
    I wanted you
    no point in trying to change that
    can't have you there's no problem in tyring to fix that
    but yet I still feel like it's a one sided story
    fit for a Two Person Puzzle
    But

    Im the only one willing to put it together
    D.Johnson




    Submitted on 2005-01-01 20:57:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love how u compare it to a puzzle. A sad story but fill with great meaning. It's sad you have to feel like that. hey your d. johnson i think u comment on one of my stuff hehehe... anyways lol good job and keep up the work hope everything will turn out better.
    | Posted on 2005-01-01 00:00:00 | by silly monkey | [ Reply to This ]



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