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    dots Submission Name: You Suckdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 895
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 366



    Description:
       This is to a guy I used to be friends with...he is to perfect.Grrr.


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    dotsYou Suckdots
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    I am infuriated
    you write so well
    you and your perfect rhymes can go to hell

    but this I do not mean
    my anger is meant for you
    I hate that you affect me at all
    because that makes me a loser to

    I am infuriated
    you are the one that hates me
    I hate that I care
    and that you are angry




    Submitted on 2005-01-01 23:58:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Damn I hate perfect people because everyone knows that I am perfect as perfect can get...just kidding. But I do hate people that thank thry are perfect and what you got here was a interesting write. But is one person ego enough to ruin a friendship?
    Peace and Harmony
    TGA
    | Posted on 2005-01-02 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      yes Indeed I indorse you view point. Perfect people look fake and Artificial and make you feel so damn odd.
    But then always remember no one is actually perfect. There has to be something you can beat him at.
    :)
    Keep wirting !
    | Posted on 2005-01-02 00:00:00 | by moaxcym | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the poem it shows your views on how you feel toward the person you are writing about.
    And who cares tha person is not deserving to have your feelings anyways.
    Feelin it in Stereo!>!
    D.Johnson
    | Posted on 2005-01-02 00:00:00 | by D.Johnson p.s.a | [ Reply to This ]


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