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    dots Submission Name: Tis All Been Dreaming...dots
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    Author: orpheus
    Elite Ratio:    4.24 - 179/159/49
    Words: 322
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 294
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       Hey...this is what every Emcee From Tu-Pac to the Beastie Boys had visualized...that they may not make it.....


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    dotsTis All Been Dreaming...dots
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    tis
    all
    been
    dreaming

    My soul's jaded and my rhymes so faded
    I spend too many long hours i-so-lated
    these lines show a greatness but I'm so afraid that
    foe's will make mince out'a my poem's statements
    the Pro's will ):tidal wave:( it till my mic's replacement
    endangers my old life and my new home's the pavement
    or my name is''recognized for the death my record dies''
    fans can change this to '' he jepardized his life and made it!''
    with second sight i saw Heaven's signs in weather and time
    letters from scribes to better define my weapon as mind
    i'm a benevolent guy who has repented my crimes
    I have the presence and right to write a sentence that guides
    this is my presidence signed, every element's excellent
    i've shovelled enought of it, piles like elephant excrament
    now I'm fresh as peppermint, adept like Americans
    when it's Hip-Hop endeveourment, I'm a clever kid
    Left embzzelment to terrorists to show no deficit
    in my poem's magnificence, just know that ever since
    I was intoduced to this 'Heiroglyphic music'
    my syndome' tattoo'd ink for you too window view it
    I won't get narcissistic in my art's specifics
    while my heart assists this like an arsonist's Bic flints
    I can't cease or desist i'm a rhyme-o-maniac
    I speak to resist till the fire-hose sprays me back
    from my deepest repress of intellect and spirit
    I invent to quill it, spill it, instraments a lyric
    with intent to deal it, I'm gonna dose these heads
    the Dopamine's dope poetry like an opiate
    stroll with me, your coma scenes won't go ta sleep
    i flow for weeks, an instant hit with a slow release
    till it's so-a-peal-ing from floor to ceiling
    there'll be more ta see then...
    for now it's all been dreaming....

    it's
    all
    been
    dreaming

    ''Phil...Philip!!''
    ''Wake-up, it's time to go!''




    Submitted on 2005-01-02 03:58:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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