i have to say that i really like your style and it is really diffrent from everything ealse you read on this site. you can take an unoriginal topic and really make it your own great work keep them comeing lia
I love your style. Yet again, the way you have expressed your thoughts and poem's purpose through a distinct style and choice of words amazes me. I love the flow of this.
i would have to agree with Redstarr. Your style is very distinct, and so are your choice of words. As far as the technical stuff goes, this was a good write. It didn't rhyme that well, but we all know that poems don't always have to rhyme! All and all, I liked the flow...good work! all the best! -Shawnothan