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    dots Submission Name: I miss you, notdots
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    Author: Ola
    ASL Info:    18/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 221/187/43
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
    Total Views: 547
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 653



    Description:
       Ok, this is like a break up thing. I'm still hurt and i'm teeling him i dont love him, yet i am telling him i do. Hope you get this from my perspective. Enjoy!!!


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    dotsI miss you, notdots
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    I don’t miss you
    I’m happy and that’s true
    As the fact that the sky is green
    And the grass is blue

    I don’t love you
    And that’s as true
    As finding light in shadow
    And today in tomorrow

    I don’t want you
    And that’s as true
    As feeling joy in grief
    And feeling Skeptism in belief

    I don’t need you
    And that’s as true
    As finding fact in myth
    And anxiety in relief

    Don’t ever need to see you
    And that’s so true
    As the fact that valleys are way high
    And that truth is now considered a lie.




    Submitted on 2004-03-23 21:20:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yeah yeah , im feeling were your coming from, well in my perspective right i know what its like (well if that is what it was like) you love someone but at the same tim eyou loath them, you get to situations were you want to be with someone but fate wont have it so. i like your whole contrast thing, really can be interpreted in so many ways. i dont know if you realise but you really left it open.

    later
    franky
    | Posted on 2004-11-29 00:00:00 | by frank bazaya | [ Reply to This ]
      Brought back memories of some of my deepest loves. Use your pain, it makes for great poetry! Hope you keep writing, nice use of metaphors.
    | Posted on 2004-03-28 00:00:00 | by matissesgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. Deep and grabbed my attention. Very nicely written I love how by you meanins its a lie you say the sky is green and the grass is blue. Lovely lol . keep writting
    | Posted on 2004-03-23 00:00:00 | by Exodus Night Sky | [ Reply to This ]



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