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    dots Submission Name: Insanitydots
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    Author: Dana
    ASL Info:    23/F/Dreamland
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 79/87/26
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       "I don't suffer from insanity - I enjoy every minute of it." That's about it...sometimes I want to escape it, but the truth is that I cannot live without it.


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    Take me away from this diabolic reality
    Keep me away from this sore insanity

    Heal my heart from its matchless fragility
    Lead my mind to calming tranquility

    O, just give me one last moment to feel
    Again...this overwhelming insanity.

    by DANA 2004




    Submitted on 2005-01-03 16:53:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dont know why but this poem made me dizzy when i read it.. i liked it though. It was short but you got your point across i read it like 10 times a let it all sink in. very nice.
    | Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Caroline_19 | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm. this only had one comment! why, i wonder? i found it to be quite intriguing. i absolutely love it when writers use 'big words' to rhyme... it's so unfortunately deviant... so many people use the oh-so-typical rhyming words... 'love...above', and stuff like that... and i also love when a writer uses the same rhyme throughout... like six words that rhyme with each other... all ending in 'ity' or some other suffix... i really liked this line: 'Heal my heart from its matchless fragility'... matchless fragility... i like saying that. it rolls off your tongue rather nicely. thanks for the read! *md*
    | Posted on 2005-03-06 00:00:00 | by MerryDeath | [ Reply to This ]


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