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Submission Name: mathematics ² dots

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Author:	Paradox
ASL Info:	25/m/Earthbound
Elite Ratio:	4.04 - 647/352/64
Words:	344

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	591
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	796

Description:
I've been away for a long time now. I have not written that much lately but I've changed my style drastically. This is one of my latest poems. I know that not many people will understand or like this but that wasn't my intention.
http://paradoxone.deviantart.com/art/mathNematics-80768603

mathematics ² dots

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Dynamic cluster Nexus andromedA
Another futile Dimension borN
Death star Nature burst rA
Ars poeta Destabila iN
Dot coNcentrate A
Ano Domini N
Da Nero A
A D N
dna
x
adn
D N A
Angel Do N
Desired Not blA
Aspire raiD photoN
DestructioN e nova artA
Adorment last Divine thorN
Defeated space Norton explosiA
Astral tar end coorDinate unknowN

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  i see what you mean about form. i have in the past done peices like this but i don't make a habit of it. while i really enjoyed the content i found the form to be a bit distracting.
| Posted on 2009-01-21 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]
  "that place in your mind it's that space that you called mine"
..This is the slang of God.Awesome clarity.Period.
| Posted on 2006-10-26 00:00:00 | by MoodyVaine | [ Reply to This ]
  Read this cause I hate math :) . Obviously, I never even expected it to be about math. Again, the form, the word play, all nicely wrapped into a single idea that might have seemed simple enough if it weren't for the fact that I read some of your other works. It's never that simple, huh?
| Posted on 2006-10-22 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
  Pretty kewl there, guy. I lyke the text more than the shape- but I guess it goes hand in hand. Math is not funn or my friend- so thys was a scary thing for me. I understand the basic scientific concepts- but... they make me afraid. I want to scrub the DNA out of me and replace it with pi... Peace, love and pixie sticks- ~#6-
| Posted on 2005-04-13 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
  this is such a fu<king awesome piece! it must have taken you some time to create it. you seem very intelligent. average joe couldn't create such a piece. anyway, this rocks, and it's so going on my fave's list! i'm looking forward to reading more of your work! ^_^
hugs and the pythagorean theory
*~dark_and_dreary*~
| Posted on 2005-04-08 00:00:00 | by dark_and_dreary | [ Reply to This ]
  This is one of the most original pieces that I have seen on this site! bravo! This must have took awile to put together. How fitting to portray math and life. It's all about numbers. VERY well done.
| Posted on 2005-06-22 00:00:00 | by laniejane | [ Reply to This ]
  let me give u a standing ovation for being so original, the format and especially your stance when you wrote people having to understand it wasn't your intention,yet you posted anyway.

Yes, you were so clever with making sure that the usage of DNA was in every line at the same time you created a time-line of math and science.

awesome write
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  Math and science are not my forte, so I probably did not understand it fully, though Ed's comment helped. Visually I really loved it and I may try something like it, but will probably fail misreably. I will print it out for further study. Lynn
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by greensnake | [ Reply to This ]
  As you have guessed, there is no way that I understood most of this poem. Although the meaning wasn't there for me, I am still blow away by your skill.
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Redstarr | [ Reply to This ]
  DNA and ANA the mathamatics of life. this is a berilliant piece and is visually stimulating. you express the fininality and course of life as throught the hour glass. amazing, wish I had written it.
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by cainboy | [ Reply to This ]
  Definitely original. Though I'm not fully versed in math and science to understand totally, I did get the DNA and part of the math used within.
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Dreams of Angels | [ Reply to This ]
  what a cool piece! great use of form and words. love it and am making it a fav!

[computer says i need more words...]
[ok, now i'm getting annoyed at this thing...]
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]

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