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I can fix me on my own

Author: painofthanatos
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Just anger after being called down to guidance...again - but I talked my way out of it so no phone calls home...

I can fix me on my own

There is Nothing going on!
Nothing is wrong!
Don't worry about me
I'll be fine when you leave me be
These cuts on my arm don't mean a thing
I just got too excited over a stupid fling
Don't worry about the tear stains on my face
I just don't want to be stuck in this place
I'm not doing this s*** for attention
I just didn't deal too well with rejection
I need to feel a little pain on the outside
To distract me from all I felt on the inside
So please don't call me into your office
I can fix me on my own...

Submitted on 2005-01-04 11:48:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Oh god. *Hugs* First off, I'm so sorry. Second of all, if you ever need to talk. I'm here...I've been there over and over again. I'm here if you need to talk to someone, even if you don't know me.
| Posted on 2005-01-17 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
  wow... your always full of amazing lines... again you hit this one out of the park.. I wish you didn't live so far from me.. cause I'd really like to meet you and write something with you. ;)
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by bleedbroken | [ Reply to This ]
  Nicely done. I almost mistook it to be toward the person who rejected you but read further. It's hard when people feel the need to invade your space and get you to "talk" about it. And the pain on the outside does deflect from the pain on the inside. However, keep writing and maybe you'll find another outlet for your angst.
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Dreams of Angels | [ Reply to This ]
  this is - i can't describe it. you have such emotions on this page..i myself never dealing with this type of thing directly, but have from afar. it sucks when people don't just understand we all have our own way of dealing with things. to many counselors out there don't take the time to see the big picture and respect the choices others make. it's counselors like this that make me mad. u are there to help and sometimes the best help is just letting them know you are there to lean on and then letting them do it their own way. i am sorry you have to go through those type of people. may i ask how old you are? well, anyway, keep your head up and your "roots" planted, i think i will be reading more of your work**
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
  This was so well put together that i cannot even give it a word of appraise.As a poem it was very flowing and easy to read.But each skill of rhyming and and imagery was so greatly balanced keeping it to the point of the message.It's like you started and each line multiplied more support to the title.
Also i feel the same too,sometimes you just want to be left alone and want to be able to fix yourself, and all the questions people asking you sorta make the situation worse,what if you can't put it into to words? or what if your not able to understand,so how could you expect me to explain it to you. Thats a feeling i go through alot,where as you just want to understand yourself,then you can deal with all the guidances and counsolors. This poem definately deserves to go on my fav. list
| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Spiritual Gifts | [ Reply to This ]
  this is well written and gets the point across in a very clear way. I like this peiece because you get the feeling of what is like to be a cutter. My best friend was a cutter and until I got to be older, I did not understand it. You put that point across very well...

| Posted on 2005-01-04 00:00:00 | by Indigo Kid | [ Reply to This ]
  I like the point you make in this, people try to fix you, try to understand you...but they would never be able to comprehend, not until something like what happend to the people like us happens to them...It pisses me off that they think we have something wrong with us...It makes me sooo mad..Anyway, I really liked your poem.
| Posted on 2005-01-08 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ]
  first let me say this, it written in a very powerful emotional way,but it so wrong in the message,beacuse when people say they r fine, they are far from it and your poem points this out clearly with the cuts,the pain and the anger.

great write,loads of passion

keep writing and i will keep reading
| Posted on 2005-01-11 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]

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