Frosty Is Dead
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angry at a prep...true story...
Frosty Is Dead
You say you understand That you’re here and you care But you think my biggest worry Must be about a guy or A bad quiz grade in chem Words like ‘alcoholic’ Mean nothing to you ‘Abuse’ registers as a word from history Used only in times of slavery And nevermore. You think suicide is a fad That died out in the 90s After the cult clad in matching nikes Committed mass suicide As far as you know Cutting is merely a story line And nothing more When I joke about my friend Being a stoner You join in and ask What kind of nerd Collects rocks? How can I share my views With someone who can’t understand A small town? I give into your Persistent nagging And make up a story about Ruining a pair of shoes I never owned You are more sympathetic Then a Hallmark card It. Makes. Me. Sick. How shallow and naïve Can you be? WAKE UP! OPEN YOUR EYES! This world you’ve created Will melt away some day And you’ll be left With just a hat A hat that’s lost all of it’s magic In the true world Of this burning hell |
Submitted on 2005-01-05 09:42:19 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I really enjoyed this poem. I too share your hatred for preps. The are shallow and never give a second thought to any one but themselves and their preppy friends. this was a well written poem. I love it.-Oli| | Posted on 2005-01-21 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ] | ahh honey this is great! doesn't it suck meeting small minded people who refuse to open their door to the real world? i hated these kind of people when i was in school. they just try so hard to bring you down and sometimes it works, but you know the real world and not the false "beauty" these people create for their world. hopefully i am close on this one, if not well this is what i got out of it.*** | | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ] | This is a good intense piece but I know there's a lot of pain in the world and people who don't understand can be annoying, just ignore them and lighten up a little. It's just too many negative things going on right now and I think it would be nice for someone to break the manotny and be a little light hearted. This was definitely a good write, I just get kind of tired of hearing about the negative things in life including how much people get on our nerves! | | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ] | wow.. I liked that one alot.. I know some people that are just like that.. they refuse to believe that the world has evil or that some people don't want to live in this world.. not like there's another option there... sorry useless rambling... that was good. I'm adding it to my fav's... two thumbs way up | | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by bleedbroken | [ Reply to This ] | This had some nice imagery...I liked it alot...I hate those close minded, shallow people...but more then them I hate prep's...their such idealists, they like to think everything in the world is perfect and their no such thing as pain...they piss me off...well, anyway I enjoyed your poem. | camoflage | Posted on 2005-01-08 00:00:00 | by camoflage | [ Reply to This ] | |
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