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    dots Submission Name: Don't Cry For Medots
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    Author: Munchie_1226
    ASL Info:    25/F/E.STL
    Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 1831/1834/185
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDon't Cry For Medots
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    Please, donít cry for me,
    My existence is one you will always know.
    Donít show me any sympathy.
    I lived a wonderful life and it was time to go.
    Donít come to my grave.
    For my soul is no longer there.
    Donít be eager to come and visit.
    Each day you feel alone, I am standing right there.


    The light making it through the clouds when the sun doesnít shine.
    That wasnít Godís doing, that was mine.
    The bird that sings, even in the rain.
    Listen well; for thatís my melody heís playing.
    The flower you see; the first one in bloom.
    If you take the time to smell it; youíll recognize my perfume.


    See, even though it seems Iím far.
    Iím really with you no matter where you are.
    So, please donít cry or show regret.
    Just look in your heart and never forget.




    Submitted on 2005-01-05 10:21:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      U know...u told me to read this and I kinda knew what to expect because of the title, but not one time did I think that it would hit me the way it did. All the things that I overlook pertaining to nature...never really meant so much to me until just now. This was something I needed to hear and I can't thank you enough for suggesting me to read it. U touched a part of me with this...and I appreciate it...not sayin it was written for me, lol, I just appreciate the fact that you wrote something like this in general. It shows a lot about you as a person. Remarkable...
    | Posted on 2005-12-08 00:00:00 | by PrettyRicki | [ Reply to This ]
      This is beautiful, wonderfully put together and it helps to heal from the loss of a loved one and we've all been there. Very well done!
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by The Black Rose | [ Reply to This ]
      which is why I always tell all my loved ones who have passed before they lower them into the ground..."always in my heart."

    I have to admit this one tugged at my heart and brought tears to my eyes, funny how really when you think of it mourning is our human self being selfish. I mean why would they want to be here on Earth where unhappiness can touch them? shoot I know when my time comes I'm going to be sun bathing nude floating on a cloud! lol talking bout "miss ya too honey but it's time for me to flip dont want an uneven tan! lol"
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful...I said it once, I'll say it again...you are such an excellent writer. This message is one we should all hang on to after someone we care for is gone. The flow, the words,...good job.
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by Dark_Dancer | [ Reply to This ]
      The flower you see; the first one in bloom.
    If you take the time to smell it; you&#8217;ll recognize my perfume.

    That line really stuck to my heart. It is nice to see something so fresh about something that can be so dark, death. Great imagary and lines were powerful
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by manicsmuse | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so heartfelt. the way you portray how a loved one lives on and is there in all the beauty of nature. this whole piece flows so nicely you did an amazing job on this one girl*** makes me really think if some of the things i see/smell/hear are really from the ones i've lost. thanks so much for sharing this***
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
      aww this really just makes me think of someone i know passon on and leaving me and im scared of death ive never had anyone close to me die so i would take that hard and ur poem is just so cute from someones view who cares very deeply about the one they left behind i hope people don't cry when i die
    | Posted on 2005-01-10 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is truly heartwarming, it's easy to burst into tears while reading such a poem...the whole beautiful writing has sticked to my mind and touched my soul, especially the last verse...
    Thanks for sharing,
    "Just look in you heart and never forget!"
    We should never forget about our dear people who lived with us and passed away. They are always locked deep in my heart. :( R.I.P.
    | Posted on 2005-01-08 00:00:00 | by Dana | [ Reply to This ]
      now lili.. that was pretty and in went together lovely but theres one line i didnt quite understand.. it was stanza 2 and the second line.. but all togther it was great..
    | Posted on 2005-01-12 00:00:00 | by AnointedPoetess | [ Reply to This ]


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