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    dots Submission Name: i am....dots
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    Author: UNunderStood
    ASL Info:    16/f/oh
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 79/87/25
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Bytes: 327



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       i am so confused about life right now and i'm not even sure what i am all i know that i am me and this is some stuuf i found out about me


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    dotsi am....dots
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    I am a child
    yet an adult
    I am a lover
    also a hater
    I am a daughter
    but yet a girlfriend
    I am a friend
    also a enemy
    I am a student
    almost a dropout
    I am a leader
    yet a follwer
    I am me,
    nothing more.
    nothing less.
    just me




    Submitted on 2005-01-05 11:53:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sounds as though you know just where your at in life right now. You seem comfortable with who you are the good and the bad.

    I just hope that the "almost a drop out" turns into "proud graduate" hang in there life for you is just begining.
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice this was straight to the point and blunt in a philosophical way. The way I wish all things were. Good write. Deep, meaningful and easy.
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by Broken Dreams | [ Reply to This ]
      I was JUST about to submit my poem called "I AM" which is full of oxymorons aswell... it's eerily alike this one... I hope you don't mind if I still submit mine... I swear that I hadn't copied your idea.
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by Redstarr | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem. It is very straight forward and deep. I tried once to write a poem about myself but it didnt work very well. I am the kind of person who can only write about other people. But it is weird how i see myself come out in the poetry i write about others.
    Hope to see more from you! :)
    <3 LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem is great! it tells ppl who u r and wat u think! it shows some independence! dont wry im confused about my life to!keep writing!
    | Posted on 2005-01-05 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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