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    dots Submission Name: When I Grow Updots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsWhen I Grow Updots

    When I was a child,
    I'd always say
    that when I grow up
    I'll be this or that.
    Then, I'd get a bit older
    and wonder what I'd do next.
    I'd spew forth my childish art
    making plans for nothing.
    The older I get,
    the more I wonder
    where the time went
    and when I'll finally grow up.

    Submitted on 2004-03-24 00:46:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      even at 61, i still wonder what i am going to do when i grow up...hell, i am putting in for social security this next year....lol

    and still feel like a child...guess that's good...

    this poem makes me feel like there is always something to look forward to...no matter how old we are...but one day, yes,
    we will ask ourselves...damn, where did the time go?

    great judy collins' song..

    "who knows where the time goes"

    good poem, amy..

    but yeah, i know ...i get redundant saying that...but i just really like reading you...

    | Posted on 2011-08-20 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't ever grow up! Not inside! Stay young. It' makes life more fun to live. I never really went through the phase where you change what you want to be every other week... it was always something to do w/ music and writing. This brought all that back. Thanks for the nice memory moment. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      I'm 19, supposed to be grown-up but I still don't know what to do with my life. I think everybody ask himself/herself this questions...
    great poem!!
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]

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