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    dots Submission Name: Spring in the Southdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I don't know what this means to me, but I usually write first, and figure out what it means later.


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    dotsSpring in the Southdots
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    Spring comes early in the South
    and summer follows closely,
    burning the spring freshness,
    but the older I get
    the staler that freshness grows.
    One day the flowers
    wiill all be black
    and smell of fish,
    and the azaleas of my childhood
    will be a distant dream.





    Submitted on 2004-03-24 00:50:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When you get a little older you'll notice that really dosen't happen at all, They all lied to you, they smell alot like vicks vapor rub and deep heet!
    | Posted on 2004-03-27 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw, sweetie! I know the feeling... I went back to the house I grew up in a few years ago... everything was different... smaller, less intense. That's why you have to live to make new memories every day, because the old things are never quite as good as you remember. Nice write. Sad, and very nostalgic, but nice. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      like being old enough to understand and it perverting on you to be too old to understand. i don't know. or maybe something else. you'll have to let me know.

    ghost.
    | Posted on 2004-03-24 00:00:00 | by myghostsliketotravel | [ Reply to This ]


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