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    dots Submission Name: candiddots
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    Author: adias27
    ASL Info:    30/F/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 33/44/10
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 319
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 457



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    dotscandiddots
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    Held in that embrace,
    that tight fisted grip you have on my soul.
    Pre-empted by shadows of twisted light.
    Air circulates in spinning rhythms.
    Falling into the down, perfect, comforting.
    Parallel shades dancing into eternity.
    Soft humming of night and all it's secrets.
    The other side of the mirror seems so solid.
    Tiny trinkets cluttering the space.
    Washing away any hint of hidden depth.




    Submitted on 2005-01-06 21:52:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow..i really like this...it's intese, i can think of a couple things this is about but as soon as i think it's some thing i read the next line and it's soem thing different...yeah i like this a lot

    sorry i can't think of any real advice...but this is going oon my fave list

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    | Posted on 2005-01-06 00:00:00 | by playing card | [ Reply to This ]
      All things that exist bt can't be seen by the human eye. You are truly gifted with great descriptive details, I have so many pictures running through my mind now. Looks like this is quite a talent you have.
    | Posted on 2005-01-06 00:00:00 | by JR Hoodlum | [ Reply to This ]
      i'm not sure if i understand this one...the first two lines seems so clear to me...but the others were confusing...this is something really deifferent...but i would really love to know what it really means...
    | Posted on 2005-01-07 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Now the title is misleading, being candid usually means anyone can understand with ease what you are saying. The poem is well written, deep and clever. One could install many different meaning to this, which is what I think your intentions were,which is always a good thing.

    Now my guess this is about one's self-esteem
    | Posted on 2005-01-07 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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