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    dots Submission Name: Taste of Blooddots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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       Good/evil. This is Evil. Next is good.


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    dotsTaste of Blooddots
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    I wish to taste your flesh,
    try to kill me, give it your best.
    I will come back to consume your soul,
    I'll strive to devour your holy glow.

    My huge claws rip your chest.
    I must have your fresh flesh.
    I let your blood run down my mane.
    You died like your dad, all in vain.

    I just want to taste your blood.
    To let it crash to the ground "thud".
    I clean your skin and don it as mine.
    I take the last of your blood as wine.

    I just want to taste your blood.
    I lust for your crimson flood.

    I will hunt your families and kill.
    Crush their skulls under my heels.
    This is Skinwalker's true will.
    To taste blood, to hunt and kill.

    Allow me to show you eternity.
    Take my claw, welcome to me.






    Submitted on 2005-01-06 23:08:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It has a very nice flow, and I like the over all poem, but my question is, is the blood sensual for you, or just another means to kill?
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]


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