Promise to Myself by sweet-fire

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Author:	sweet-fire
ASL Info:	21/f/ky
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 296/279/42
Words:	75

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	297
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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this was a poem that i had to write for my english class. there was really no meaning behind it i just had to write something and when i finished i realized it was about my guy...sad huh?

Promise to Myself dots

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You look at me.
I look at you.
I see in your eyes,
a lie that is new.

You start to speak
and i close my eyes.
I ready myself,
for more of your lies.

You go on and on,
but i tune you out.
You say you love me.
I hide my doubt.

You make a new promise.
I make one of my own.
To kill you gently,
and remain alone.

Submitted on 2005-01-07 10:06:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ok i like this especially the

You make a new promise.
I make one of my own.
To kill you gently,
and remain alone.

It made me smile because i can remember thinking the same thing. I'm never going to talk to that jerk again, erasing his number, the whole nine yards and it never worked. But everytime he lied or pissed me off i would make the same promise. Life is a trip.
| Posted on 2005-01-24 00:00:00 | by Ann | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, i was the first to READ and COMMENT on this one:)

You make a new promise.
I make one of my own.
To kill you gently,
and remain alone.

That, as you already know, was my favorite part:) Not much else to say to you about it...seeing as how I have already told you what I though of it...MAKE THEM TURN THE MUSIC OFF! STUPID PREPSSS!

p.s. did you know the new guy's in here?

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| Posted on 2005-01-07 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ok this is what I like,it is just the way that I write.You show good emotion and the rhyme it not just your every day crap, you can tell a story and keep the rhyme clean(not sure how else to explain it)I really liked -
You look at me.
I look at you.
I see in your eyes,
a lie that is new-
I know that all to well.
This is a favorite,thanks
| Posted on 2005-01-07 00:00:00 | by Forgiven | [ Reply to This ]
  Haha no no sad at alll. In fact most of the piecesI've posted in the past have been about my man. But in a different light. His love inspires me. I never thought something so powerful could exist. But no matter what love- happy orsad it makes us do crazy things, makes us feel and is one of the mot commonly used themes in writing.
| Posted on 2005-01-07 00:00:00 | by Emmalee | [ Reply to This ]

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