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Submission Name: Wall dots

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Author:	Nagow
ASL Info:	20/f/Denmark
Elite Ratio:	2.56 - 56/70/29
Words:	33

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	747
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	192

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Wall

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Charise me or else I die
This seems to be my final sigh
No feeling really takes me high
Maybe I should say good bye

Chained to the wall
My mind falls

Submitted on 2005-01-08 12:23:17 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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