heaven or hell? by Nagow

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Submission Name: heaven or hell? dots

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Author:	Nagow
ASL Info:	20/f/Denmark
Elite Ratio:	2.56 - 56/70/29
Words:	22

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	844
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Not much to say, would just like to know what you think?

heaven or hell? dots

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Through the wind she flies
looking down an endless well
poisinous blood, she slowly dies
is this heaven or is this hell

Submitted on 2005-01-08 12:25:49 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I think that Heaven and Hell should be capitalized... because they are proper places... but yeah... other than that... it was good. Good job... keep it up.
| Posted on 2005-01-08 00:00:00 | by poetofthenight | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.