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    dots Submission Name: heaven or hell?dots
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    Author: Nagow
    ASL Info:    20/f/Denmark
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 56/70/29
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsheaven or hell?dots
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    Through the wind she flies
    looking down an endless well
    poisinous blood, she slowly dies
    is this heaven or is this hell




    Submitted on 2005-01-08 12:25:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think that Heaven and Hell should be capitalized... because they are proper places... but yeah... other than that... it was good. Good job... keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-01-08 00:00:00 | by poetofthenight | [ Reply to This ]


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