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    dots Submission Name: Red stains the white.dots
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    Author: RichieHM
    ASL Info:    18/m/irl
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 69/69/21
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 335
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 787



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    dotsRed stains the white.dots
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    Sitting cold and nervous between the sterile tiles
    Pain rushes through my vains,
    Hurt an confusion corrupt my heart.

    Blindly it beats.

    A flickering diamond of hope lies softly in my palm
    Its edge, sharp and ready
    To stop the pain.

    Take it between my fingers,
    Feel the beautifull coldness,
    Watch it glide gracefully along my skin.

    The hurt trickles lightly.

    Reach for the cream, wash away the red,
    Applying it slowly on to raw skin,
    It covers it in a gorgeous white.

    But that eventually is stained,
    As red droplets seep through the thin carpet,
    The short feeling of power dies.

    And again the pain begins to build.




    Submitted on 2005-01-08 17:57:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      are you kidding me....i LOVE it!

    Pain rushes through my vains,
    Hurt and confusion corrupt my heart.

    i love this line the best ^
    | Posted on 2006-12-03 00:00:00 | by bloodyalexander | [ Reply to This ]
      thank you for writing a poem that is worth reading. ive read about 20 tonight and just couldnt comment they were so awful. i thought this was really good and did a great job evoking the feelings of pain and hopelessness. also very original. nice write :)
    sophie
    | Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ]



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