Guilt by Poechick13

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Author:	Poechick13
ASL Info:	16/f/IN
Elite Ratio:	3.34 - 42/59/22
Words:	47

Class/Type:	Poetry/Trapped
Total Views:	288
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	324

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Guilt

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With cadaverous tendrils flared,
And its spiteful teeth bared
It call'd me in with deception high
Aware as I was It drew me nigh
It shrieked in pitches aghast
Detrimental it was, I couldn't get past
Vanquishing my hopes and stability
My conscience killed me at last

Submitted on 2005-01-09 00:54:24 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Before i get to the poem id like to say... Yay Kenshin, he's so cool. Now to the good stuf, Nice work. you used on of my favorite words in it nigh (That word is so awsome) i hate human emotions such as the conscience, theyre so friggin annoying.

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And its spiteful teeth bared
It call'd me in with deception high
Aware as I was It drew me nigh

I like the way you portrayed your conscience as well... Evil to me. its cool. Nice work
| Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]

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