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    dots Submission Name: Starched Soldiersdots
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    Author: Leala
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 245/299/70
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    I think life is like
    ... the dry cleaners.
    You start off free,
    situated all your own.
    But as you go along
    you get steamed with
    thoughts you should think
    and pressed flat into the common mold.
    And you come out
    dressed in the plastic of the popular uniform.

    © © 2005 by Trishia J.




    Submitted on 2005-01-09 15:52:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, what a metaphoric gem, I'm im"pressed", nice write and so true, we come into the world innocent and naive, then we become tainted with learned behavior and thoughts...nice..Bob:)
    | Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by poetryman | [ Reply to This ]
      In away we are all the numd to the things around us.
    Everything that has happened happened before,
    We are so accutomed to what we see on the new right down to the pimp on the corner.Sad Really we have amused ourselves to death.

    Peace and harmony

    Shawn
    | Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      nice analogy although hopefully it is not the way we will all end up! I like this little poem very much. did you mean 'situated all on your own'? that would make more sense to me. very nice images throughout.
    | Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by sierramuse8 | [ Reply to This ]



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