Washed Up (The Tsunami Prayer) by Lady Tragedy

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Submission Name: Washed Up (The Tsunami Prayer) dots

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Author:	Lady Tragedy
ASL Info:	15/F/Not Where You Are
Elite Ratio:	3.66 - 87/66/14
Words:	99

Class/Type:	Poetry/Death
Total Views:	333
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	639

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This is dedicated to anyone impacted by the tsunamis in Asia. It is a prayer as-said by a young boy who lost his mother in the disaster.

Washed Up (The Tsunami Prayer) dots

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God, are you mad at us?

Daddy says Mommy's not coming home
He says she's washed up with the sea
But I don't understand
She said she'd always be there for me

God, are you listening?

I want my mommy back
So we can play hide-and-seek
I have never seen my Daddy cry
But now his tears are washed up on his cheek

God, are you with her?

Tomorrow is my birthday
And then I will be seven
I already feel wise
'Cause I know Mommy's washed up, up, up...
Washed up into heaven.

Submitted on 2005-01-09 19:14:29 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this one, I feel the same way about the tsunamis. You should add a little more to it so you can get more emotion into it. I was already shedding tears by the time I reached the part where you say 'God, are you listening?' I wish the world could see this poem . . . It would show that people really do have hearts . . .
| Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by WindEmpress | [ Reply to This ]
  Beautiful. Absolutly beautiful. The last stanza especially captured my heart. Wonderful piece, wonderful words and an amazing flow. Lovely.
| Posted on 2005-01-22 00:00:00 | by Emma_closes | [ Reply to This ]
  wow. This is wonderful. Very sad, yet beautiful. I think you did a wonderful job on this. The whole thing is so sad with so many people dieing, and I can't imagine how many children are feeling like this...but I do think god is there, and listening. wonderful poem!
| Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow what a wonderful thing you have written.

I know being a guy im not suppose to have tears but this made my eyes watery.
Well written I applaud you. I felt sad for this little boy.

Peace and Harmony
Shawn
| Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
  well done very insightful and also good perceptiveness and style keep the good work up I to pray for those who were impacted by the Tsunami
| Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]
  My eyes got all teary. It so sad when its like little children speaking about there mom or dad thats in heaven. Its a real good way to keep someone reading the poem. my heart goes out to them. I love it
| Posted on 2005-01-09 00:00:00 | by Hazel eyes Jess | [ Reply to This ]

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