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Basking In the warm comfort of you I feel our spirits mesh and twist The metamorphosis of love and lust Feeling.. Smelling... Tasting.... Sexual bliss Soft lips Caressing fingertips Floating in your energy I feel a transformation Our souls weave and entwine Like the fabric of space and time Bound together for eternity We were ..... as we are..... As we will be Basking |
mmmm.... wonderful. I think maybe you're selling yourself short here. It didn't feel clichéd to me at all. And that last "basking" is perfect. Ties the whole thing together. <><| Posted on 2004-03-28 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ] | Leave it (the basking, that is...)! i'm kind of speechless. This was very beautiful to me. I found nothing cliché whatsoever. it had sweet, delicate imagery. Another very nice piece Mr. Mojo-Risin'. Later.... | ![]() | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by Voodoo_Lounge | [ Reply to This ] | I think it's ok. Just using a word doesn't make something clichéd. It's how you use it. I think this is great. | | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ] | |