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    dots Submission Name: I Will Windots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsI Will Windots
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    One thing I'm sure of
    Is that we will always be
    Even though the road
    Seems to get a little rough
    It's for you I live
    I can do anything
    And it will never be too much
    In my darkest hour you are there to light the way
    And when I'm down you always lift me up again
    You know me better than I know myself
    You comfort me and let me know

    With you I'm going to win
    Walk with me, hand in hand
    We will help each other understand
    How to get through
    There will never be a day
    That we'll grow apart
    So, we'll forever be
    Together, hand in hand

    Sometimes I'm wrong
    And even in that case
    You didn't go away
    You stayed right next to me
    As time goes on
    I realize that you're for me
    And I will love you for eternity
    In my darkest hour you are there to light the way
    And when I'm down you always life me up again
    You know me better than I know myself
    You comfort me and let me know

    With you I'm going to win




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      Sometimes I'm wrong
    And even in that case
    You didn't go away
    You stayed right next to me
    As time goes on
    I realize that you're for me
    And I will love you for eternity

    I love poems that make me be able to say I feel this same way about my bf. I mean you came across with courage and understanding making it known that you truly love this person and that they ought to know. I found one spelling error, your "Life" is supposed to be "lift" But I got the idea. Besides that great write and it will be added to my fav list. Rock on. I'm out like a deaf kid in musical chairs...its a pun...not meant to be mean. thanks for the write.
    | Posted on 2005-01-10 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]


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