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    dots Submission Name: Trapped in an Operadots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTrapped in an Operadots

    Sometimes I feel trapped in an opera
    where normal expression has no place:
    grand gestures,
    elaborate costumes,
    tones sung too high or too low
    to be real,
    where my dreams are stage directions,
    and the fifth dimension is intensity

    Submitted on 2004-03-25 03:10:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOL! this is how i feel a lot of times! whenever i am in a quandry about what i should do and what 'other people' will think of it, i just imagine that they're just parts in a soap opera - i alone will live with me. interesting write!
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting way to put it... I always think it's like watching a tv show... or being in a bubble--slightly disconnected and overexagerated.
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting... I'm a music major, being trained for opera, so this was kinda funny to me. Accurate. Amusingly accurate. And yet... there is a sense of...longing. For what I'm not sure. Nice piece. <><
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by WorththeWait | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, the ending was amazing... your older work is definitely better... but I LOVED LOVED LOVED the past line! The fifth dimension is intensity... that's exactly the way it is, like th nerves are a palpable THING you could real out and touch... and it's so different, so uniquely operatic... which is wonderful the way you compared such a unique idea to everyday life. Wonderful!
    | Posted on 2004-05-30 00:00:00 | by Cora Windover | [ Reply to This ]

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