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    dots Submission Name: My Love For youdots
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    Author: Writer Chic
    ASL Info:    15/F/at my house
    Elite Ratio:    4.83 - 100/101/26
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 570
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 416



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       i hope u like this piece, it's a work in progress, so it ain't perfect


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    dotsMy Love For youdots
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    My love for you,
    is more than just true.
    I feel closer to you, than ever before
    I shall love you forevermore.

    My love for you,
    is more than I’ll ever do.
    We are inseparable from this day,
    more needn’t shall I say.

    My love for you,
    makes you my life long boo.
    Till death do us part,
    I shall never break your heart




    Submitted on 2005-01-11 00:37:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is a straightforward love poem, which is good. I would like for you think more outside the box when you write. meaning this, don't start with my love, something like this:

    Never knowing what love really was,
    until we embrace

    Now that I know
    Do you know

    Am I alone

    Sip me slowly
    taste my longing

    Will you refill my cup of love?

    This just a quick example
    | Posted on 2005-01-11 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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