This is a wonderful use of imagery. You really paint a vivid picture with your words. You have a great style of writing. I like the way it rhymes. I do not see how people already jump to conclusions just because it rhymes. I personally write a lot of rhyming pieces and think if written well can be very powerful. You did a great job here. Keep it up.
there's a lot of imagery in this, and it's very good that you manage to change the picture in my mind in every verse. I love the last stanza...and i love how there is a refrain in the line " they tell me of you" . You've compared all over the poem, with beauty in the words. Keep it up.