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    dots Submission Name: Leave Him Alonedots
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    Author: River
    ASL Info:    17/F/New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 26/37/14
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 270
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    dotsLeave Him Alonedots
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    Love is something that can break your heart and not give a damn that it did.
    Love is something that will make you do something you always forbid.
    See the guy that treats you the worse is the one you’ll want.
    And the man that treats you like his angel is the one who you want flaunt.
    As woman we always put down the man that should be by our side.
    Instead of making him feel like the man he is, and letting him have some pride.
    We don’t believe in romance anymore, pulling out chairs and opening doors.
    All we believe is in sex now, that’s why men call us whores.
    We never take the time to reflect on life and our soul.
    That’s why were still searching for it as we are old.
    If he’s perfect we still try to mold him into the man we want him to be.
    Instead of appreciating who he is and loving him for him, like he loves me for me.
    You see love is blind, so most girls can’t see.
    And love hurts so our hearts will bleed.
    So take to time to know what you want, go ahead sit down.
    Because the next guy that you play won’t mess around.




    Submitted on 2005-01-11 07:06:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well again a very strong piece of work here although i will disgree.. about what you say about love , it is us who are blind not love.. that blinds us .. but i do like your work and i hope things will shine up for you.. people are not colours.. people are souls.. good and bad.. and who you are is your soul and not your color.. very very good work keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-01-11 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your poem i can tell you definetly feel what you are writing. I think it really makes you have to think whether you agree with it or not. Nice work :)
    | Posted on 2005-01-11 00:00:00 | by Selene | [ Reply to This ]



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