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    dots Submission Name: Passiondots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 738
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1074



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    dotsPassiondots
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    I try to sleep,
    But instead I lay awake.
    Every cell in my body
    Tingling
    At the thought of you.
    Every image that
    Runs through my opened mind
    Is a picture, so perfect, of you.

    And if I could wish for something more
    There would be nothing.
    You are everything, you are perfect,
    You are you.

    The thought of your tongue
    So warm in my mouth
    I relish and keep.
    The feeling that I get
    When your hands so gently
    Brush over me
    Is so much more than I could ever say.

    And if I could wish for something more
    There would be nothing.
    You are everything, you are perfect,
    You are you.

    Your arms wrapped around me.
    Your body, and mine, so warm together.
    Pressed up against each other.
    Lips, arms, hands, mouths...
    Passion.

    And if I could wish for something more
    There would be nothing.
    You are everything, you are perfect,
    You are you.




    Submitted on 2003-12-20 21:33:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yeah love is great through its ups and downs. I feel the emotion of this poem. Reading it brought some sun into my cloudy day.
    | Posted on 2003-12-22 00:00:00 | by Diakato | [ Reply to This ]
      What i got!
    Sorry...
    Passion is what you've got here...you've written just that...and I can feel it too...I guess that means this is an awesome poem...but thats to be expected of you, Jennifer.
    | Posted on 2003-12-21 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]



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