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    dots Submission Name: Random Peopledots
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    Author: riverseo
    ASL Info:    18/Male/Belfast
    Elite Ratio:    4.17 - 24/34/13
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Just a thought that has often occurred to me, what are other people doing and what are they thinking, its not just you in this worl, there's millions of others you will never know...


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    dotsRandom Peopledots
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    Random people you see on the street
    Faces you may never know
    May never happen to greet
    The faces of the happy, sad and mad
    And those who God is about to meet

    The thoughts of the human race
    The tears of the many millions
    That fall from every single face
    Do you really want to know
    What is beneath the surface?

    Can you hear them weep alone?
    Laugh together heartily
    Or see them being cut to the bone
    By other random people
    You have never known.

    Do you wonder are we the same?
    The blur of bodies you go past.
    Who could assign to you the blame
    If you ignore those souls, we all do
    As we commute on life’s train

    Can you think of so many, is it feasible
    To care for them all, maybe if you
    Look down from the church steeple
    You can ask yourself what is the difference
    Between you, me and all those random people




    Submitted on 2005-01-12 22:12:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, this was a little bit of a change from the things of yours that I've read lately. I liked this - it was so thoughtful, more than emotive...if you know what I mean. You had a good flow here - going from random people that you don't know to caring for those people. Nice job. mae
    | Posted on 2005-01-13 00:00:00 | by mae | [ Reply to This ]
      This might seem random but it is the thought that came to my mind while reading this. Strangers are just friends you haven't met yet.
    Now on to the poem. I have thought like this many times. I look at all these people I don't know and wonder what are their lives, how do they feel what is their past like...but I will never know because there are so many people here I can never meet...so many people that will be left unknown and thus forgotten... Okay I liked reading this...Got me thinking...
    | Posted on 2005-01-12 00:00:00 | by Cigarette Smoke | [ Reply to This ]


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