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    dots Submission Name: Mary Celestedots
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    Author: serpentarius
    ASL Info:    18/m/Melbourne
    Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 97/80/23
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 415
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 701



    Description:
       It's about Mary Celeste (a little research won't hurt) the ship. One day, as the crew set out, they never reached bayshore. It had been 14 days beyond the scheduled time. As a search team set out, they found the ship, drifting off course with each and every crew member and civilian missing. No signs of violence or anything of the sort. There's a theory that states that they were abducted by aliens. I sort of poem-ized the whole situation.


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    dotsMary Celestedots
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    Trees are known for all the tragedies
    That they keep to themselves
    A ruthless story per ring
    Wood yearns to burn
    I can only wish to burn dear God
    I have been tenaciously denied my salvation
    So all I can do is weep
    And tell the world
    That 'twas not a seaquake
    And it was not a pirate pillaging
    But a bright, bright light
    Purer than white
    Which dissolved my immemorial master
    In its misty sleaves
    Her lovely wife
    What about the frock-fashioned little girl?
    And the whole crew dear Lord
    My destiny isn't to burn
    But to soften underwater
    Like bones in vinegar...




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      wow, creative. I too know the story, but I never had the motivation to write a poem about it. I think you've got the just of it, although you could be clearer, but then again, the mystery adds to it. A very good write!
    -becca
    | Posted on 2005-01-13 00:00:00 | by thesacredone | [ Reply to This ]



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