Description: Here's the quote I wrote that goes with it.
Sensuality is like water, its starts with a drop, moving ever slow to rain, quenching the thirst of the soul. While cascading it with warm loving kisses, thus touching the mind as well body. As it begins to overflow the dam of personal ego allowing the vulnerable side to be showered by trust, once there. It wants to free fall over the waterfall of the future, while holding hands.
A love that's true.. in all circumstance of life. Good and bad.. flaws, imperfections. This reminds me of wedding vows.. To honor and cherish, in sickness and health, for richer or poorer.. etc. Very few hold to and keep these because they are expecting perfection in the other. Love is acceptance, wanted to know the other iniside and out. Sharing the good times and the bad. You've said all this so beautifully in this lovely poem.
This is the kind of stuff that I really do write about. Love. Not the depressing stuff that I have on here. I just put those on here because I didn't have anything else with me at the time. Except "the pain". I had just written that one. This is the only time I get to get on the internet. I'm at work. Keep up the good work. manda_bear
This is a description of true love. Knowing someone's flaws but looking at them through eyes of acceptance and love. It's great how tender your approach is on this subject. And then admitting that you are not without your own flaws... and that you realise you are also loved and accepted despite your shortcomings. Wonderful write.
this is poetry at its finest! this is an all encompassing of the acceptance that woman yearn for regularly! between the imposibility of Hollywoods standards and everyone else's beliefs it is so hard to see that not EVERYONE is perfect. but that is what is so beautiful, the imperfections make the person beautiful inside and out...this is a new fav Ed!
A line from one of my favorite songs goes, "I know every foolish thing you've done, and I love you anyway." We can spend our lives and loves looking for perfection, when we could have had happiness. How sad. Love, Lynn
awesome stuff! I get this one...dig it! Perfect love means a love that can look past faults and see the real person...but I would have to disagree with one thing it says here...that God din't say all men are equal..Hhe never said that in those words, but He implies that...
All men are sinners before God...we are all equal because it is a matter of where are heart is, not what we do, that justifies us..and God is the one who changes are hearts and covers our sins...so we are equal...even if one eprson has done more good than another, if the person who has done more good is not doing it out of a pure heart that is totally void of selfishness (impossible apart from Jesus) then that person is just as bad as the other guy... then there is the fact that those who are redeemed are all teh same no matter what has happened to them or what they have done..we are all seen the same in God's eyes because we are only saved because He loved us and died for us...that is the only factor... anyway, don't mean to be rambling on here or stirring anything up..ya jst got me thinkin that's all..lol :D
But I enjoyed this poem! I can really relate to everything that was said...
Finally, a realistic look at love. None of the namby-pamby stuff. This is very well written and beautiful. Being in love with a person is accepting everything about them, baggage they bring along, like their past, included. I also like the fact that it's brief and doesnt drone on repeating itself. Good job. I salute you.
the only problem with this is that I would like it to be longer. LOL. it was so nice and refreshing for sombody to bring their lover back down to earth. ( i am at fault for putting people up on a pedestal)l "Let the dreamers fail in their quest of flawlessness" and so i have failed...
This is a great poem! I want to see your flaws... now that's love! A vast majority of people are so concerned with perfection that they forget it's our flaws that make us unique, what make us human. Thanks for sharing... the poem and the quote!
i was completely in awe of this. i love it so much. really, wow, well done. i love the very pure feeling you give to this and just the acceptance of anything that is a part of the one you love. i am not a sappy person but i just loved this. good job :) sophie