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    dots Submission Name: Spilled Milkdots

    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is from a series of poems I did that either used clichés in a new way or turned them inside out. It's about how I tend to plan my failures.

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    dotsSpilled Milkdots

    Upon rising I’ll walk around the block and buy some milk,
    and upon returning I’ll cry when I spill it.

    Submitted on 2004-03-25 14:20:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If you plan to fail and you fail, can you call it a success??!!
    Interesting write! I know someone who celebrates failures but I know for sure she doesn't plan then...
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      I would liek to see the whole series put together. That would be a fun read.
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
    Thought this one was a bit wierd... cute in a backward sort of way though.
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      this is cute cuds, poor little girl...was it a long walk? i hope not!
    | Posted on 2004-03-25 00:00:00 | by pestiferous | [ Reply to This ]

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