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Fairytale Crap


Author: Chicool2
ASL Info:    17/f/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 266 /260 /60
Words: 128
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Aittle piece I wrote out on a fairytale that I want to become reality. I just wanted to explain myself...


Fairytale Crap



I bet you have heard
The fairytales
Of the beautiful princess
Possibly in line to rule Wales

Well I can't help but detest
That I hate the warm feeling
We live in reality
Where seeing is believing

I want to believe this
That future comes true
But how can I be happy
If my future consists without you

The fairytale crap just sits on the hill
With much love and affection
I will not believe
That I may have a succession

I have been waiting too long
Too many days and nights
I can't take much longer
To wait for the knight

So make up your mind
For the people and me
If you choose not to
Then please let me be....




Submitted on 2005-01-14 08:30:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  excellent metre, and it tells a wonderful story. it seems you wait, like a vision, for the "one." or so i see it. almost transcendental in the flow, nice rhymes, nice rhythm. almost as if youre thumbing your nose at dreams within dreams if i may say so. very descriptive. most impressive.
i liked it.
-Q
| Posted on 2005-01-14 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]


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